Feedback

Here you can see our class writing down feedback on our film opening

After watching each other's drafts for the film openings we recieved feedback on our opening.

The most repetitive feedback we received was

- The Doctors voice was too boring and dull, it did not sound realistic enough and it seemed as if it were being read of a script
- The end scene was too long however people liked the fact it produced a lot of questions about the film and that it was a good ending to a film opening.
- Make sure the music plays throughout the whole opening because it gets boring without it.
- Sophia's voice over needs to be said slower and there needs to be more emotion in what she is saying
- The titles are very quick so thy need to be made longer. Also the font was boring and vague.
- Better transitions are needed to make the shots join well.
- The glare effect on the flashbacks immediately tells you it isa flashback so there is no confusing, it also adds a lovely effect on the scenes.
- The phone call is too loud and sounds too grainy, this needs to be edited.